portfolio 2, corrected

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16TNmY3TpbeuqwR6Do3NxGM9x6IcUOvXhC1eY8H18JrA/edit?usp=sharing

Trinity task correction #2 (not finished)

10/10/13

Today has actually been a pretty good day, I found a $5000 bill, and a $2000 bill inside a pocket of a jacket, it was amazing, I was looking for my keys but I found money instead! all I wanted to do was to save it, but as I was going out, I decided that it could help me if I needed it.

Trinity task correction #1

A couple of years ago, many people would say that Anyone graduated from allsop school should need to make the last four years again in another school to be able to learn something, but now, thanks to its new headtecher, Mr. Michael Wilson, things are starting to turn out right

He has changed the hole school's rules, and has gotten just the results he wanted, now, all students have to wear a grey and red jacket or jumper, ties, and grey pants, also black shoes, they all have to wait for thei teacher in lines in front of their classrooms until ther teacher tells them to get in, they send back home students if they are wearing the wrong type of shoes,or if they wear their hair too long or short, or if they are caught using cellphones in class

In my opinion allsop has improved a lot, but, being so strict, can be a double-sharpened weapon

GOT IT AT LAST!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16TNmY3TpbeuqwR6Do3NxGM9x6IcUOvXhC1eY8H18JrA

A trip to Istambul

First of all, Istambul is a charming city, only, if you know how to interact with it, as you may know, there is not much thing in Istambul that occidental people may know of, but once you are inside the city, you'll discover a lot of things, specially the mosques, on wich, you cant enter with shoes, and women have to enter with a sourte of bandannaon the head, either way,  what I liked the most, it was "The grand Bazaar" the one that kept my attention, it is the biggest market. One of the traditions in the Bazaar is the haggle, if you don't haggle the price, they get offended! 

How to plan the perfect party

One very important thing in a party is that the music is not only good, but loud, the basses in a song are not heard by anyone who hasn't a trained hearing, but, when loud, it can be felt in the air, sometimes up to the point of getting you hungry , this is a prove that volume is almost as important as the music itself, as the music, the environment on witch the part is made is also very important, all of the light effects are welcome, even more if they are along with the music.

One important thing why some parties fail is because they have too many environmental light, or the music is weight too low, I personally prefer parties that have loud and good music, another thing that helps a lot in the whole matter of parties, is a DJ, because even when some of them (most of them) aren't cheap, they really come along with the people much more than a CD, and it stops being necessary to ask people to bring they own music, which also looks bad. 

section 1, task 3

Hi Mark,
How you doing? I'm writting you so that we don't loose contact again and tell you, I'm going to participate in a sports competition, the prize for the winner is to meet a famous sports star, I think I would like to meet Marcelo Rios, because he got to be the N° 1 of the world, he is very talented, and of very specific goals.

the only problem is that a lot of people is going to assist to this competition, and I'll have to practice a lot if I really want to win

well, hope you are doing something exciting to!
gaspar