A trip to Istambul

First of all, Istambul is a charming city, only, if you know how to interact with it, as you may know, there is not much thing in Istambul that occidental people may know of, but once you are inside the city, you'll discover a lot of things, specially the mosques, on wich, you cant enter with shoes, and women have to enter with a sourte of bandannaon the head, either way,  what I liked the most, it was "The grand Bazaar" the one that kept my attention, it is the biggest market. One of the traditions in the Bazaar is the haggle, if you don't haggle the price, they get offended! 

How to plan the perfect party

One very important thing in a party is that the music is not only good, but loud, the basses in a song are not heard by anyone who hasn't a trained hearing, but, when loud, it can be felt in the air, sometimes up to the point of getting you hungry , this is a prove that volume is almost as important as the music itself, as the music, the environment on witch the part is made is also very important, all of the light effects are welcome, even more if they are along with the music.

One important thing why some parties fail is because they have too many environmental light, or the music is weight too low, I personally prefer parties that have loud and good music, another thing that helps a lot in the whole matter of parties, is a DJ, because even when some of them (most of them) aren't cheap, they really come along with the people much more than a CD, and it stops being necessary to ask people to bring they own music, which also looks bad. 

section 1, task 3

Hi Mark,
How you doing? I'm writting you so that we don't loose contact again and tell you, I'm going to participate in a sports competition, the prize for the winner is to meet a famous sports star, I think I would like to meet Marcelo Rios, because he got to be the N° 1 of the world, he is very talented, and of very specific goals.

the only problem is that a lot of people is going to assist to this competition, and I'll have to practice a lot if I really want to win

well, hope you are doing something exciting to!
gaspar

Letter to Mycroft

dear mycroft,

What is happening right now is really complicated, so, I'll start from the beginning, I was in the forest with Amus Crowe, when we suddenly found, A DEAD CORPSE! I don't know what to do, please help, since i got here I've noticed everithing is very strange, please let me go away from here, maybe paying a taxi to come pick me over, as I know you'll think this is another try to get out of here with no reason, come here and see it by yourself, but please do something

hoping everithingi is alright
Sherlock

another one bites the dust

A couple of days ago, I was watching the athleticism Olympics of Russia, and I saw in the 500 plain meters race something that I think is more than unacceptable, because just when Krusten Frjuglagen, a competitor from Proganistan was just going to win the race by passing by Fritz Undermagen from germany, he was hit by his competitor!

Although all of the public present in the stadium saw it, the referee didn't, because he was watching how Yelena Isinbayeba (another russian athlete) stretched, Istrongly believe that this referee should be boiled in his own blood. 

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my common mistakes glossary

samples made by the teacher:

1)Last month I decide to organize an surprise party for my best friend

Last month I decided to organize a surprise party...

error: "decide" should have been in past

 examples made by myself: 

  a)Last month we decided to go to Australia

  b)I decided to start playing cello

2)The birthday day we go to my friend home, while her mom taked to the mall to distracted,we have around one hour to preparated, and when he arrived we jump on it and get surprised.

The birthday day we went to my friend's home, while his mom took him to the mall for distraction. We had around one hour to prepare everything and when he arrived, we jumped on him and he got surprised.

error: every single verb should be written in past, most of the pronouns are wrong

a) Yesterday I fell and hit my knee

b)I couldn't got up earlier

3)These past winter vacation /These past winter vacations

error: it should be in plural

a) these stairs are amazing

b) those windows are dirty

4) I would go for Michael Phelps/ I would go with Michael Phelps

error: for/with error changes the whole meaning of the sentence

a) I will run for him/ I will run with him

b) I won't do it for him/ I won't do it with him

5)I was boring/ I was bored

error: "ing" meaning confused

a) I was sleep/ I was sleeping

b) I was make my bag/ I was making my bag

pages for the grammar mistakes:

"ing": http://www.grammar.cl/Notes/Spelling_ING.htm

 plurals: http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/grammar/plural.htm
 past: http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past
http://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/participlepast.html
http://www.perfect-english-grammar.com/past-perfect-exercise-1.html




pages to practice:
http://www.mhschool.com/reading/treasure_workbooks/national/g4/grammar_pb.pdf
http://teacherweb.com/MA/Foxborough/gentilea/grammar-practice-book-grade-4.pdf

section 1, task 5

Dear Jwuljeefoo, 

Is it true you want to become a TV presenter?  I've heard it is pretty difficult isn't it?

I think you would find it really hard all of the acting and reporting thing, because you don't only need to be a very good reporter, but also not to panic in front of a camera,

Either way, I think you'll do it fine because you have a radio interlocutor like voice, and you aren't so bad looking, also you are very funny, so you can add some flavour to the program.

Hope you have good luck.

Gaspar